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Behind a wooden frame of stained glass, into the darkening trees .
Towards raging sea.
An evening betides new symphony, drifting, sweeping away in a swirling medley
of melting amber and charred silver
I must say, I was quite speechless when something I composed gets talked down for being too complicated or too deep. Unfortunately, I dont think i write for people as much i am persuaded to write simplified sentences that are easier to understand. Yeh... the sort of 3 in 1 coffee literature satchels, less metaphors , less symbolism, more direct language with punchy headlines. pfft but that isnt poetry anymore, well but certainly sounds like a news article!
Unfortunately, I cannot for the world change my style of writing to suit the majority public. Logical' people should really stop being logical and see everything through the insular, narrow windows of logic and facts . This isnt a science journal ok? gimme a break.
Towards raging sea.
An evening betides new symphony, drifting, sweeping away in a swirling medley
of melting amber and charred silver
I must say, I was quite speechless when something I composed gets talked down for being too complicated or too deep. Unfortunately, I dont think i write for people as much i am persuaded to write simplified sentences that are easier to understand. Yeh... the sort of 3 in 1 coffee literature satchels, less metaphors , less symbolism, more direct language with punchy headlines. pfft but that isnt poetry anymore, well but certainly sounds like a news article!
Unfortunately, I cannot for the world change my style of writing to suit the majority public. Logical' people should really stop being logical and see everything through the insular, narrow windows of logic and facts . This isnt a science journal ok? gimme a break.
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